Currently im watching the Babylon 5 DVD's and become the wish to a Wallpaper for the Babylon 5 Universe. I tryed the first time the jumpgate model i found.
Jumpgate by CClancy Star Fury by Mark Kane
If you like that, follow the link to a small movie scene i made with the jumpgate [link]
Nice composition, and it's great that you credited the original 3d modellers. Also, I watched your short movie scene. It is on the whole, good! My only nitpick was that the jumpgate activation sequence needs a bit more lead-in time/ room for viewer anticipation, as it was rather abrupt. However, the effects and the flight path of the Starfury was quick, clean and efficient.
Good stuff!
Its a unwritten law for every 3d'er to gave credits to the original modeler. They have spend much of time for his work.
The Movie scene was a quick test for animation. I was see i can made the opening of the hyperspace vortex.